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Short Story: the imaculate missconception
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something i wrote about two year ago or less. i never got to finish it, not even sure it's worth finishing.
it's in pdf format because it's a bit longer than a short story  The Immaculate Missconception 
08-08-2013, 08:13 AM
i'm so nervous yet at the same time so excited
 start reading with very low expectations please :J: 
08-08-2013, 09:44 AM
To answer you question: Yes, I am surprised.  I skipped around, read a few pages and intend to read some more. I think you've done a good job of weaving parts of the traditional story into yours. And I really like how much fun you obviously had taking advantage of Mary's last name to construct some pretty wild sentences...
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
08-08-2013, 10:09 AM
i really did enjoy doing it, but after taking a break in the uk, i forgot everything i'd wrote and found it to hard to get back into the writing of it. what really screwed me up was the fact that i'd lost a whole chapter when trying to save it. i think that was a proverbial straw. thanks for looking round it
08-09-2013, 02:24 PM
(08-07-2013, 09:43 AM)billy Wrote: something i wrote about two year ago or less. i never got to finish it, not even sure it's worth finishing. (I didn't read the whole thing) This looks like a series of great SNL skits. I can't believe you wrote an entire book parodying the birth of God.
I'll be there in a minute.
08-09-2013, 02:42 PM
This is almost a whole book. I liked the pages I read of it but the goddamn pdf clicler kept dropping each page to quickly and I kept losing place. got frustrated around page 22 and stopped reading because the pdf.
I once told this blond chick to screw in a light bulb..
She got naked and asked "how do I get in it?" (08-09-2013, 02:24 PM)newsclippings Wrote:each chapter tries to connect to something in the life of jesus.(08-07-2013, 09:43 AM)billy Wrote: something i wrote about two year ago or less. i never got to finish it, not even sure it's worth finishing.(I didn't read the whole thing) just an alternative to believe in. thanks for taking the time to read  (08-09-2013, 02:42 PM)R.C. KITCHENS Wrote: This is almost a whole book. I liked the pages I read of it but the goddamn pdf clicler kept dropping each page to quickly and I kept losing place. got frustrated around page 22 and stopped reading because the pdf.no problems r.c and thanks for reading part of it i think you can download the pdf from google, though i've never tried
08-09-2013, 03:35 PM
You should finish it too. You've already gotten this far, so why not?
I'll be there in a minute.
08-09-2013, 03:37 PM
i can't remember what i wriote, even if i read it over and over i can't keep the plot in my head
08-09-2013, 07:11 PM
(08-07-2013, 09:43 AM)billy Wrote: something i wrote about two year ago or less. i never got to finish it, not even sure it's worth finishing. This ain't no short story, but there is a great deal of humor and sarcasm in the first few pages! I will try to read more here and there.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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