Serpents of the Orbital

[ChristopherSea]

coiled road vipers,
retreads spit out
by articulated lorries

[Keith]

Retreads spit out by
articulated lorries
coil like road vipers

I have see these snakes, nice observation and I like the idea that they a born from a spitting re-tread

you could swap lorries for shreds but I like it as it is. Best TOMH

[ChristopherSea]

Retreads spit out by
articulated lorries
coil like road vipers

I have see these snakes, nice observation and I like the idea that they a born from a spitting re-tread

you could swap lorries for shreds but I like it as it is. Best TOMH

Thanks TOMH. I am writing a highway poem and when I looked up some details on 18-wheelers, I was fascinated by the UK term of 'articulated lorry' for them! Thus, I had to give tribute. 'The London Orbital' was another great sounding term for the UK's major artery. Then there was the viper as one of the only snake species on the grand island. Saint Patrick may have driven the anguine from Ireland, but he fell short in England.

[billy]

Retreads spit out by
articulated lorries
coil like road vipers

i don't think by or like is needed though you may have to make coil coiled for it to work nice one chris

[ChristopherSea]

Retreads spit out by
articulated lorries
coil like road vipers

i don't think by or like is needed though you may have to make coil coiled for it to work nice one chris

I think you are right billy, thanks!