Memories

[jdvanwijk]

Four square bars grind on and on:
we can't choose our fever songs.

[Anokk]

I enjoy this. the simplicity leaves it open to so much in my mind. Only i feel like the can't would sit more comfortably as can not. Can't just seems too advanced for this IMO

[crow]

The second line comes close to sloganeering--well done! (To me, a sloganeering is one of the highest verbal arts)

[LickinLyrics]

What the heck is a sloganeering. Very interested! But I DO love the fact that the shortness of the poem gives the reader the option to envision many a different things.