04-05-2014, 05:02 AM
Crying robin up at dawn
heals the daybreak with a song,
sees a worm and takes a bite
world erupts in sweet delight.
heals the daybreak with a song,
sees a worm and takes a bite
world erupts in sweet delight.
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Chocolate
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04-05-2014, 03:44 PM
Nice, succinct, and tasty.
Glad to see you back around dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't. 
04-20-2014, 04:55 AM
I am no poet, but I liked how short but well imagined this was. You conveyed your message well, and you could "see" your inspiration. I thought it was a great piece.
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