Dear forest, you've changed
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Dear forest, you've changed!
No longer bare in the cold,
but clothed in the heat!
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#2
neat haiku MarkworthSmile
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Tell him about "Fauxku Choo Choo" Marianne. Haiku are welcomed there. He only has to use two words from the previous poem. Haiku, short poem, and the odd limerick, and some are pretty odd, wink, wink, nod,nod! Go Marianne, tell him!


dale the sotto voce
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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yes, do join us in the choo choo Markworth>Big Grin< - it's awful fun, and I don't want to be seen to be hogging it - which i am!Big Grin
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(05-13-2014, 11:29 AM)Markworth Wrote:  Dear forest, you've changed!
No longer bare in the cold,
but clothed in the heat!

This brought a smile, true and funny. A nice example of a natural sounding 5/7/5.
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Much appreciatedSmile Yes, indeed, I will have to jump in. Sounds like good practice and good fun.
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