05-13-2014, 11:29 AM 
	
	
	
		Dear forest, you've changed!
No longer bare in the cold,
but clothed in the heat!
	
	
	
No longer bare in the cold,
but clothed in the heat!
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					Dear forest, you've changed
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		05-13-2014, 11:29 AM 
	
	 
		Dear forest, you've changed! No longer bare in the cold, but clothed in the heat! 
		
		
		05-13-2014, 01:22 PM 
	
	 
		neat haiku Markworth   
		
		
		05-13-2014, 01:29 PM 
	
	 
		Tell him about "Fauxku Choo Choo" Marianne. Haiku are welcomed there. He only has to use two words from the previous poem. Haiku, short poem, and the odd limerick, and some are pretty odd, wink, wink, nod,nod! Go Marianne, tell him! dale the sotto voce 
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece? The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't. 
		
		
		05-13-2014, 01:35 PM 
	
	 
		yes, do join us in the choo choo Markworth>  < - it's awful fun, and I don't want to be seen to be hogging it - which i am!   
		
		
		05-13-2014, 08:42 PM 
	
	 (05-13-2014, 11:29 AM)Markworth Wrote: Dear forest, you've changed! This brought a smile, true and funny. A nice example of a natural sounding 5/7/5. 
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips 
		
		
		05-14-2014, 10:32 AM 
	
	 
		Much appreciated  Yes, indeed, I will have to jump in. Sounds like good practice and good fun. | 
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