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Tiger the Lion Offline
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#1
10-01-2014, 11:25 AM
pumpkin pie 
unsatisfied 
familiar couch
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10-01-2014, 01:13 PM
(10-01-2014, 11:25 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  pumpkin pie 
unsatisfied 
familiar couch

i couldn't connect it. they read as three separate lines. 
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10-01-2014, 02:14 PM
(10-01-2014, 11:25 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  pumpkin pie 
unsatisfied 
familiar couch

Ha, yes, nature versus nurture!
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#4
10-02-2014, 06:53 AM
(10-01-2014, 01:13 PM)Tamara Wrote:  
(10-01-2014, 11:25 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  pumpkin pie 
unsatisfied 
familiar couch
i couldn't connect it. they read as three separate lines. 
eating rich foods
alone, unsatisfied
a familiar place this autumn
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