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1.10.14
rayheinrich Offline
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#1
10-01-2014, 02:16 PM
        new world
        this banana
        blue
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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10-01-2014, 02:33 PM
(10-01-2014, 02:16 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:           new world
        this banana
        orange

i enjoyed this simple haiku. the colors herald autumn and i like the way you chose to project it. lovely.
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10-01-2014, 03:16 PM
(10-01-2014, 02:33 PM)Tamara Wrote:  
(10-01-2014, 02:16 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:           new world
        this banana
        blue

i enjoyed this simple haiku. the colors herald autumn and i like the way you chose to project it. lovely.

Damn, I screwed up, should have been blue. Autumn must have blue somewhere. Jeans?
How about those berry-flavored (they promise) trick-or-treat candies? Yeah, that's the ticket.
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#4
10-01-2014, 07:15 PM
Blue lips?
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