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After putting in the seed,
I rolled in bed at half-past 8.
Razed and burned,
I fell into a superhuman sleep,
and my God
the alarm clock
always rises for the morning rite.
If only I could swing to more than left and right.
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(11-26-2014, 05:51 PM)Brownlie Wrote: After putting in the seed,
I rolled in bed at half-past 8. Nah. Don't mix it...half past eight.
Razed and burned,
I fell into a superhuman sleep,
and my God
the alarm clock Only one nit. It's Christmas come early. No el?
always rises for the morning rite.
If only I could swing to more than left and right.
Hi brownlie,
I can translate it but that last line IS awkward in more than one way. It could be simplified as the meaning is malleable.
Best,
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Brownlie,
Frost through a pane of hoary ice
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Lol (not sure if that acronym is appropriate here) the possibilities for ribbing Frost could go on and on. Good point about the numbers too. I pronounce alarm as uh-larm.
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(12-10-2014, 07:41 AM)Brownlie Wrote: Lol (not sure if that acronym is appropriate here) the possibilities for ribbing Frost could go on and on. Good point about the numbers too. I pronounce alarm as uh-larm.
Err...no...I meant the el in clock
you are ribbin me!
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(12-10-2014, 07:58 AM)tectak Wrote: (12-10-2014, 07:41 AM)Brownlie Wrote: Lol (not sure if that acronym is appropriate here) the possibilities for ribbing Frost could go on and on. Good point about the numbers too. I pronounce alarm as uh-larm.
Err...no...I meant the el in clock
you are ribbin me!7
tectak
Ah yes the alarm cock. Very clever.
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(12-10-2014, 08:03 AM)Brownlie Wrote: (12-10-2014, 07:58 AM)tectak Wrote: (12-10-2014, 07:41 AM)Brownlie Wrote: Lol (not sure if that acronym is appropriate here) the possibilities for ribbing Frost could go on and on. Good point about the numbers too. I pronounce alarm as uh-larm.
Err...no...I meant the el in clock
you are ribbin me!
tectak
Ah yes the alarm cock. Very clever.
Sheeeesh