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12-12-2014, 10:06 AM
Trollgirl,
Yes, I have heard this frustration/complaint expressed often  Welcome to the site, Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't. 
please leave feedback in one of the three main forums/mod
12-13-2014, 05:32 AM
If you can write poetry, you can read and comment on it. If you're not sure how, please refer to the numerous explanatory threads on the site, starting with this one.
It could be worse
12-14-2014, 10:56 AM
I too also write my poems originally as "wraps." I like how your poem gives a really ambiguous mysterious vibe to the audience.
I'm tired of everyone wearing the same ego./
They're like hoards of sheep, but a Mind is plain lethal./ 
12-31-2014, 05:58 PM
(12-14-2014, 10:56 AM)Voker101 Wrote: I too also write my poems originally as "wraps." I like how your poem gives a really ambiguous mysterious vibe to the audience. This not critique. It is a gratuitous comment on you you you. Write something meaningful or useful or puposeful.Mod. (12-31-2014, 12:57 PM)itsjustjess Wrote: Hi, Trollgirl! Welcome. Please avoid commenting on yourself. This is not critique of the poem.Mod. |
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