GRASS
#1
Snowy days in may
a blade of grass
twists my mind
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#2
I thought your mind was already twisted! Did it get twisted back, because I may not like that SJ.

It always amazes me when snowstorms hit so late...thankfully we've had unseasonably hot (and drought) conditions. It is supposed to finally rain today, not just blow thunder around in the sky. We shall see.

I like this dear...last line makes it for me.

cheers, mel.
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#3
I love the interaction between line 2 and 3. We might twist grass around our fingers so the word feels right when you then apply it to the mind.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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#4
I have a fire going tonight,weather is totally out of order

mind is as twisted as ever
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