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03-05-2015, 01:20 AM

midnight trespass
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03-05-2015, 07:45 AM

I can't see the image ...

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03-05-2015, 08:02 AM

(03-05-2015, 07:45 AM)just mercedes Wrote: I can't see the image ...

You're right. The first line is abstract. Rethinking it. Looking for concrete.
Thanks Merc.

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