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Tiger the Lion
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03-05-2015, 01:20 AM
midnight trespass
whitewashed
by morning snow
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03-05-2015, 07:45 AM
I can't see the image ...
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Tiger the Lion
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03-05-2015, 08:02 AM
(03-05-2015, 07:45 AM)
just mercedes Wrote:
I can't see the image ...
You're right. The first line is abstract. Rethinking it. Looking for concrete.
Thanks Merc.
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