Salivation

[Tiger the Lion]

Salivation

Free:
lunch

[bena]

Short and sweet...now time to eat.

[Bunx]

rubba dub dub thanks for the grub

[Tiger the Lion]

Thanks for reading guys. The attempt here was a bit of a nod to the Hemingway 6-word poem. And secondly, for the title to be misread (some of the time) as "Salvation", which completely changes the meaning. Just playing word games.
Paul

[bena]

Oh, I read it correctly! I could hear Pavlov's bells a dinging. I love 6 word poems, which is why I started that thread in fun about them. 3 words (if you include title) is definitely hard. I totally appreciate what you did, and I love the play on the title. I was just laughing in bemusement when I read it and probably should have delved deeper instead of offering a silly rhyme, which i NEVER do as you know.

love ya,
mel.

[Tiger the Lion]

Oh, I read it correctly!  I could hear Pavlov's bells a dinging.  I love 6 word poems, which is why I started that thread in fun about them.  3 words (if you include title) is definitely hard.  I totally appreciate what you did, and I love the play on the title.  I was just laughing in bemusement when I read it and probably should have delved deeper instead of offering a silly rhyme, which i NEVER do as you know.  

love ya,
mel.

Don't worry Mel. I won't tell anyone that you only make rhymes for me.