09-11-2015, 12:49 AM
Hello lethal-
Given the title, I'm guessing that "pineal" has a "third eye" reference... What that means in reference to the poem, I don't know.
The piece has a certain vampirishness about it with the 2nd line, but (for me) it didn't continue into L.3.
Me thinks that line #3 has more sonic flare, than bite (ie meaning), and obscured the meaning (for me).
First impression,
... Mark
Given the title, I'm guessing that "pineal" has a "third eye" reference... What that means in reference to the poem, I don't know.
The piece has a certain vampirishness about it with the 2nd line, but (for me) it didn't continue into L.3.
Me thinks that line #3 has more sonic flare, than bite (ie meaning), and obscured the meaning (for me).
First impression,
... Mark
(09-09-2015, 10:19 AM)lethalpen Wrote: a drop of Channel N°5
to soothe the initial love bite--
pineal portal activation