Rainy Night

[Bianca Alabaster]

Sudden tension
aggressive presence
high beams too close
Tailgater!

Passes fast
exercises freedom -
rush on man
your accident awaits

© 6/9/2010


I don't think I posted this here before.

[billy]

nice short poem this one Bianca.

i love the shout at the other car.
wouldn't change a thing about it

thanks for the read as always

[heslopian]

I know it isn't haiku, but it read a little like it, with the short, sharp lines and the end cutting points. Funny and well carved, Bianca

[Bianca Alabaster]

Thanks guys very much