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10-23-15

10-23-15
ellajam Offline
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#1
10-23-2015, 08:10 PM
dawn reveals mists
framed in fire
when did we fall
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10-23-2015, 08:28 PM
sublime despair well done

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#3
10-23-2015, 09:00 PM
(10-23-2015, 08:10 PM)ellajam Wrote:  dawn reveals mists
framed in fire
when did we fall

Yep. I can see it out my window.  Thumbsup
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#4
04-07-2017, 06:09 AM
Great ending line.

Is it a working title, or a significant date?
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04-07-2017, 06:25 AM
(04-07-2017, 06:09 AM)Lizzie Wrote:  Great ending line.

Is it a working title, or a significant date?

I don't really recall, I think it has no title, it's an autumn date but I would hope it doesn't need it, can't tell now. Smile
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