The new delivery
yellow cranes on snow
lift and carefully assign
an edited version above.
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The new delivery
yellow cranes on site
lift and carefully assign
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 The new delivery yellow cranes on snow lift and carefully assign an edited version above. 
11-02-2010, 03:29 PM
Very graphic... love the picture it puts in my head.
I must be slow, but where's the seasonal indicator? 
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
11-02-2010, 03:50 PM
the new delivery is normally associated with spring
11-03-2010, 12:15 AM
The seasonal link sounds really tenuous to me, but other than that I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for the read, Billy
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
11-04-2010, 09:53 AM
seeing as two say the seasonal idea sucks i'll edit it , done
11-04-2010, 10:55 AM
Much better, I think
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
11-06-2010, 05:09 AM
I second that
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
05-19-2012, 02:31 PM
thanks lethal, jack and addy.
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