06-05-2016, 03:55 PM
The first 3 lines have been going around in my head for days, so had to get them out.
I'm not a big fan of short lines, but I think they're ok for this one...or are they?
After death
I'm not a big fan of short lines, but I think they're ok for this one...or are they?
After death
After death
we will be
like birds on red maple trees
perched above
the greening valley's breath.
Burst into
remembered song
that journeying the seven seas
we heard, and hoped
to sing one day
like birds.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

