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[Lizzie]

melting frost
            black rooftops
      daylight stars

[Sparkydashforth]

Pretty much what quixilated said....seriously, I like how you
constructed this image.

melting frost
            black rooftops
      daytime stars

[RiverNotch]

melting frost
            black rooftops
      daytime stars

if only we had winter here

[Lizzie]

Pretty much what quixilated said....seriously, I like how you
constructed this image.

melting frost
            black rooftops
      daytime stars

I didn't so much construct it as observe and record. I do love me some undeserved praise, though.

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melting frost
            black rooftops
      daytime stars

if only we had winter here

It's beautiful, but uncomfortable. So is sunshine. I'm impossible.

[CRNDLSM]

It's beautiful, but uncomfortable. So is sunshine. I'm impossible.
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Is this the sequel?

[Achebe]

melting frost
            black rooftops
      daytime stars

Daylight stars 
A bit dodgy but better for sonics

[Lizzie]

It's beautiful, but uncomfortable. So is sunshine. I'm impossible.

Is this the sequel?
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Perhaps

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melting frost
            black rooftops
      daytime stars

Daylight stars 
A bit dodgy but better for sonics

I debated that word a fair bit. I was going to go with morning stars, but I think MorningStar is a brand name, and I didn't want to hassle with that.

I think the change would be an improvement, so it's been implemented. How dodgy???

[RiverNotch]

melting frost
            black rooftops
      daytime stars

Daylight stars 
A bit dodgy but better for sonics

I debated that word a fair bit. I was going to go with morning stars, but I think MorningStar is a brand name, and I didn't want to hassle with that.

I think the change would be an improvement, so it's been implemented. How dodgy???

morning stars would conjure up the image of a thousand Lucifers or Venuses for me -- yeah, it is sort of a brand name. not sure that would have been what you were going for, so i'm kinda glad you skirted that

also a thousand clubs. head-bash, not head-bang

[Lizzie]

Daylight stars 
A bit dodgy but better for sonics

I debated that word a fair bit. I was going to go with morning stars, but I think MorningStar is a brand name, and I didn't want to hassle with that.

I think the change would be an improvement, so it's been implemented. How dodgy???

morning stars would conjure up the image of a thousand Lucifers or Venuses for me -- yeah, it is sort of a brand name. not sure that would have been what you were going for, so i'm kinda glad you skirted that -- Yeah, you're right about Lucifer. I didn't think of that.

also a thousand clubs. head-bash, not head-bang --