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haiku?
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#1
11-23-2010, 11:58 AM
Geese on the wing
winter is coming
perpertuum mobile
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11-23-2010, 12:30 PM (This post was last modified: 11-23-2010, 12:31 PM by billy.)
i really really like this one sj.

perpetual motion shown through the cycle of the year
and nature.

thanks for the read.

it works as a haiku for me.
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11-23-2010, 01:00 PM
thanks Bill
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