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in the end, this is what i want, this is all i live for
the voice of god declares i'm close
a close friend: we shall overcome
motivational poster hanging in my bedroom
double bed, moonlight, stranger to my right
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(04-27-2017, 01:04 AM)RiverNotch Wrote: in the end, this is what i want, this is all i live for
the voice of god declares i'm close
a close friend: we shall overcome
motivational poster hanging in my bedroom
double bed, moonlight, stranger to my right
I like this little ditty even if I don't feel cut off reading. It's that last line that makes me feel like it's only a strophe from a larger work. But metered lines always do that to me.
Thanks for the read
Luna
In your own, each bone comes alive
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)