Like sand, getting everywhere
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my arms are full of pillows
and my pillows 
miss your hair
And so it goes :-)


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The title reminds me of the Star Wars prequels, which automatically brings this down for me. I didn't dislike them, but if there's one thing you shouldn't allude to (at least without carefully scrubbing out any traces that it is an allusion), it's pieces of dialogue like that.
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