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		04-18-2018, 01:05 PM 
(This post was last modified: 04-25-2018, 03:10 AM by Todd.)
	
	 
		Rules: Write a poem for national poetry month on the topic or form described. Each poem should appear as a separate reply to this thread. The goal is to, at the end of the month have written 30 poems for National Poetry Month.
 
 Topic 18: Write a poem based around a central metaphor.
 Form: any
 Line requirements: 8 lines or more
 
 
 Questions?
 
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Figurehead
 
 A Rule Britannia relic, fixed,
 blind-eyed and wooden to the prow.
 
 Redundant icon, one whole century
 has passed you by. But now, you may
 
 turn back those tides, unchart the map
 and with a steady hand, with purpose
 
 set your course, unseeing straight line, firm
 from here, over the edge of the world.
 
 
 
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		Open mic
 A fallen fledgling
 pulled from the cats claws,
 we helped you hold
 your broken wing,
 fed you on the nights
 the nest was empty.
 
 And now there you are
 perched on the highest bow
 with a song that carries summer,
 fresh fruited and ripened
 in your smooth sunlit plumage.
 
 I will wistle your tune long after
 you fly south.
 
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Hearst Expires
Once they shone yellow, bright
with sharp nattering and flare of life— 
chirping, pooping where they lived,
all opinion, saffron sparks in lamplight.
Now, canaries in a coal mine
they’ve gone gray, cracked voices
harsh amid loud pointless picks
and grate of shovels, cursing
miners who have lost their way:
they warn, false old-line journals
that freedom dies in darkness
but instead cough bile and die
to lie in pretended loyalty
unnoticed as the air goes empty.
 
 
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		Jellyfish
 It's a spineless thing to do;
 
 you're five beers deep
 and text your ex
 
 knowing she'll be splashing
 the wine and thirsty for whys.
 
 She's swimmingly single again
 and might be down.
 
 Do you ever mean to sting.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Grounded
 Most hopes have feathers,
 hallow bones,
 wings capable of flight;
 their fall inevitable.
 Other hopes are made of metal,
 soaring high,
 usually landing safely.
 Then there's the sky,
 our minds,
 giving colour
 to suffocating vastness.
 
Time is the best editor.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Fury's a fireof Amber in April
 her ember heart
 of hot, heated, hatred
 spewing words of wisp and flame
 as my sweat sizzles on her face
 suffocating me in memory's smoke
 and leaving ashes to my name
 
assholery not intended .
 
		
	 
	
	
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		I must have missed
 
 I must have missed the sign that tells the trees
 to stop the sweet sap flowing - now it’s time
 to stem the dancing shimmer of the leaves.
 
 We played together; flirting with the breeze,
 we moved as one, seductive love in mime.
 I must have missed the sign that tells. The trees,
 
 bereft of decoration, knobbly knees
 and splint’ry elbows showing, wait in line
 without the dancing quiver of their leaves
 
 and naked, patient, wait for winter’s freeze.
 Where are you now? I called with my last dime.
 I must have missed. The sign that tells the trees
 
 the dance is over? Summer lover flees
 and can’t be reached. Now I must pour out lines
 without electric quivering of leaves,
 
 all bony knees and elbows. Spiders weave
 where once we formed a couplet’s perfect rhyme.
 I must have missed the sign that tells the leaves
 to stop their thoughtless beauty in the trees.
 
 
 
 I'ma get back to this one
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		04-19-2018, 10:57 PM 
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		Megaphone Politics
 
 This horn is a horn of plenty.
 Grapes and olives and French grenades
 pour out of its wide mouth
 
 which you draw close to yours,
 kiss, and spit
 tastes sweet as mead.
 
 Or you ram it up your cunt
 and nacre clamps your cervix shut.
 
 Just the tip! you blast
 through this horn into a rally
 of kowtowing Jews,
 
 you want to get the traffic moving.
 Fuck-yous slip out of their windows --
 
 Yes, this horn will help you hear.
 And like Fafner dragged out of his cave
 or potent Zeus birthing Athena,
 
 you'll become a unicorn,
 a stag, a devil-goat
 shut up by cruel bombs.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		forget the umbrella
 it´s suddenly april.
 the trees start to sweat,
 expending their juices.
 they secretely hope, but wouldn´t expect
 clouds out of nothing to send
 such a heavy salute,
 tickling the leaves on its way
 to the roots.
 
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		04-26-2018, 06:21 AM 
(This post was last modified: 04-26-2018, 06:21 AM by Todd.)
	
	 
		Rock-Paper-Scissors
 I gave you this ring
 as a symbol of being entwined
 inseparably together,
 but our hands clench
 into fists. We have cut
 ourselves off from former
 relationships, and still,
 this union is only a piece of paper,
 a zero-sum game to win.
 
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
 
		
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