08-14-2018, 10:21 PM
Summer Lateness
August: paper leaves
fall dead of thirst, not Autumn’s
cool, discarding purge.
August: paper leaves
fall dead of thirst, not Autumn’s
cool, discarding purge.
Non-practicing atheist
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Summer Lateness - Edit
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08-14-2018, 11:16 PM
sure, syllables, but still: cut 'customary'
08-15-2018, 11:10 AM
(08-14-2018, 11:16 PM)RiverNotch Wrote: sure, syllables, but still: cut 'customary' edit1; Summer Lateness August: paper leaves fall dead of thirst, not Autumn’s cool, discarding purge. Thanks, a good place to start! No leaves survive, but some less than others: I'll keep trying. Non-practicing atheist
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