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Need for Winter

Need for Winter
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#1
01-31-2019, 12:44 AM
Northern lawns are green
like children resisting sleep;
Noel glitter fades.
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#2
02-01-2019, 05:43 PM (This post was last modified: 02-01-2019, 05:44 PM by billy.)
glitters feels like it wants to be glitter, and fade feels like it wants to be fades.
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#3
02-02-2019, 01:14 AM
there Smile
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