vertical louvres
noisily thrash in strong wind
cats claws dig in deep
noisily thrash in strong wind
cats claws dig in deep
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the scream
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03-22-2019, 08:32 PM
(03-22-2019, 04:25 PM)billy Wrote: louvres blow open nice, I'm not sure you need "back and forth", for me it clashed with the movement of L1.
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03-24-2019, 06:38 AM
(03-22-2019, 08:32 PM)ellajam Wrote:(03-22-2019, 04:25 PM)billy Wrote: louvres blow open Could the louvres be vertical? (Or are they then called something else?) @billy - admire the way absence of an apostrophe in or about "cats" creates ambiguity there. On third reading, picked up an image of a surface (best left undescribed) clawed in vertical slices.  Non-practicing atheist
03-24-2019, 11:08 AM
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