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Mythos (Cinquain)

Mythos (Cinquain)
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#1
08-14-2020, 11:57 PM
Mythos

He sleeps,
waiting beneath
ripples of briny deep
'til the stars are right in the sky--
Cthulhu.
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#2
08-15-2020, 12:16 AM
waiting
deep
till the stars are right
HORROR


I'm sorry. I'm a riffman, not a critic.


But you have to go beyond words to get chtulhu
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alonso ramoran Offline
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#3
08-18-2020, 04:29 AM
I agree with rowens. Seems as if you let the notoriety of the name do the poem's heavy-lifting
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