Thanksgiving
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Thanksgiving (a Gogyohka)

The cloying aroma
in the oven
permeates the air
and makes the house
feel like home.
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(08-29-2020, 12:00 AM)Torkelburger Wrote:  Thanksgiving (a Gogyohka)

The cloying aroma
in the oven
permeates the air
and makes the house
feel like home.

Had a little trouble with "cloying" and "in" - they create an ambiance different from what I remember, thinking of turkey and a tight oven.  But their unexpectedness makes the point that your (or this) home is different; perhaps it features ham gridded with cloves, a perfectly plausible alternative.

Nicely done.
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