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A Mind Of Its Own. (senryu)

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01-29-2011, 06:46 PM

The shopping trolley
Is well and truly loaded
It keeps acting strange

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01-30-2011, 12:04 AM

Impressed!
Great twist and very witty!
R.Y.

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05-15-2012, 02:42 PM

thanks guys.

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