"Assamption."

[Ris Yerg]

Night.
Frost.
Frozen silence
Fell on the earth.
I listen to crystal-clear
Stars jingling ...
Though,
It can be my teeth.

[billy]

assamption is a word i'm struggling with.
though the poem itself works as humorous.
i like the last 4 lines if this

thanks for the read ris.

[Ris Yerg]

Hi, Billy!
Thanks for reading and comment!
R.Y.

[addy]

I confess i don't quite get the title as well...

Like the poem itself, though. The only thing I wasn't fond of was "frost" and "frozen" put so close together since it made the adjective sound like a needless repetition... maybe another word that has similar meaning can be substituted. But overall very nice, and a quirky, unexpected ending to boot. Thanks for the post

[Ris Yerg]

Thanks, Addy, for kind comment!
Yes, Addy, you are right, but I'm not a professional and write for fun. Ha-ha!
Thanks, once more!
R.Y.