Adopted

[Magpie]

adopted

as kids my brothers and i
would get alphabetti spaghetti every friday
- mine always spelt "fuck off"


older version

adopted

when we were kids my brothers and i
would get alphabetti spaghetti every friday
- it seemed to me that mine always spelt
'fuck off'

[Semicircle]

adopted

when we were as kids my brothers and i   just for shortenning sake
would get alphabetti spaghetti every friday
- it seemed to me that mine always spelt    I think cutting this would make it more personal. What do you think?
'fuck off'

Yay an Ambrosial drop!

Thanks for the read,
Sc.

[Magpie]

Thanks Sc. I agree with your suggestions and have edited accordingly, it reads much better now

cheers
mark