Assassin

[RajaZuberi]

Marketplace of assassins is what I seek
Quite a soft target I want you to ash

I get to have my terminal breath drawn
While you get to draw all my cash

[Semicircle]

Marketplace of assassins is what I seek,
quite a soft target, I want you to ash  You want me to ash? Why are you talking to me? Also, what do you mean by me "ashing"

I get to have my terminal breath drawn
while you get to take all my cash Why would you want this?

Do you go to the assassins marketplace to get stabbed? You act as if losing all your cash, getting stabbed, and then dieing is a good thing. Why is that a good thing? Why do you want that?

This poem has me scratching my head. I'm not sure what it is trying to accomplish.

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also, I almost forgot, you have to give a critique before posting.

Them's the rulez

[RajaZuberi]

Yeah, it’s literally related to a suicidal thought. And I’m not sure if I’m allowed to post such stuff in here. It’d be better if I may know whether I’m allowed to post similar stuff, as almost everything I think of is somehow related to suicidal thoughts.

Edit: ummm, alright. I’ll give a critique before continuing. Thanks!

[Semicircle]

Yeah, it’s literally related to a suicidal thought. And I’m not sure if I’m allowed to post such stuff in here. It’d be better if I may know whether I’m allowed to post similar stuff, as almost everything I think of is somehow related to suicidal thoughts.

You can post stuff like that, you just need to offer a critique before. We make poems about suicide on this site here and there. In fact if you look in miscellaneous poetry there is a thread where you can post your suicidal poems.