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"Luck."

"Luck."
Ris Yerg Offline
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#1
02-20-2011, 01:24 AM
Where the real
Individuals?

They were eaten,
Fortunately, long ago
In the dimly lighted
Caves.
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billy Offline
Are you alluding to me?
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#2
02-20-2011, 10:34 AM
nice humour
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