11-05-2022, 06:11 AM 
	
	
	
		Words ain't worth their weight in dirt
Action's worth in words
Does is and nothin' more
fillin' a hole
	
	
	
Action's worth in words
Does is and nothin' more
fillin' a hole
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		11-05-2022, 06:11 AM 
	
	 
		Words ain't worth their weight in dirt Action's worth in words Does is and nothin' more fillin' a hole 
		
		
		11-06-2022, 11:56 AM 
	
	 (11-05-2022, 06:11 AM)Semicircle Wrote: Words are ain’t worth their weight in dirt Hi slicer- The first two lines ate pretty good, but the last two are a bit of a let down. Not sure what to suggest, but I think going for the rhyme doesn’t help. Mark 
		
		
		11-08-2022, 07:17 AM 
	
	 
		Action is a word without recognition epitaph Thanks for the suggestions Mark. | 
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