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"Broken spell."

"Broken spell."
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#1
02-25-2011, 07:46 PM
An incantation -
You are younger
(Older, smarter)
You must give him up for ... -
Not works on me anymore.
I realized
That my
Own ass
Can be as sly as
His does!

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#2
03-03-2011, 03:20 PM
it has understanding Big Grin
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#3
03-07-2011, 02:40 AM
Yes, I hope for ...
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