EDT in DC
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EDT in DC

summer leaving
right on time

3
2
1

fall !
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CDT in TX

Autumn winds scatter
dry inscribed sycamore leaves  
summer’s artifacts.
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HA! Very ku reply poem, Tim.  Gotta love it!

Autumn winds scatter
dry inscribed sycamore leaves  
summer’s artifacts.


(With the fall upon us, I just had to write a short one about the autumnal equinox occuring in the eastern US at precisely 3:21pm, since the exact minute changes every year.  I just love a cosmic count-down coincidence like that.)

Mark
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(09-23-2021, 12:24 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  HA! Very ku reply poem, Tim.  Gotta love it!

Autumn winds scatter
dry inscribed sycamore leaves  
summer’s artifacts.


(With the fall upon us, I just had to write a short one about the autumnal equinox occuring in the eastern US at precisely 3:21pm, since the exact minute changes every year.  I just love a cosmic count-down coincidence like that.)

Mark

Cool.  Might I suggest a colon after that 3?  I was simply reading it as a countdown.  People might not be any the wiser, but it would lead them closer to that coincidence and be a fun conceit.
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