03-07-2011, 11:49 AM
ripples on water
as earthquake meets frosty end
Kyoto trembles
as earthquake meets frosty end
Kyoto trembles
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03-07-2011, 11:49 AM
ripples on water
as earthquake meets frosty end Kyoto trembles
03-07-2011, 12:00 PM
Nice haiku Billy. I especially liked the second line. The first one reminded me of the famous scene in Jurassic Park where Timmy watches the surface of the water in two plastic cups tremble.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
03-07-2011, 11:10 PM
Hi, Billy!
Very good, indeed! I like it. R.Y. |
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