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Seasonal Sentimental
Hold me if you want,
your boundaries are sacred too.
Bloom seasonally.
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(09-21-2024, 02:11 AM)Bunx Wrote: Seasonal Sentimental
Hold me if you want,
your boundaries are scarid too.
Bloom seasonally.
With the title and seasonal reference, this is quite an agreeable haiku/love poem... even without understanding what "scarid" means in this context. Now that I've looked it up, the image of a parrot-fish nibbling on a corral (who is nibbler, speaker or spoken-to?) will remain after the mystery is resolved.
I wonder what other poems could be improved, or founded on a single word of mysterious meaning... the ay you let me touch your gaste (sic).
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Lol the mystery is my shameless typo... Promptly corrected
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(09-21-2024, 08:12 AM)Bunx Wrote: Lol the mystery is my shameless typo... Promptly corrected
That was my first guess (along with "scared" and "scarred") but I hesitate to second-guess. Good poem.
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