I might not look at the leaves at all tomorrow

[Wjames]

Yellow red maples can frame
your bicycle, the river’s roll may bathe your voice,
sunbeams through wood will kiss
your hair.

[dukealien]

Delightful. Hints in title and L2, then payoff at the end.

[spencedude75]

very sweet. I love the subversion and the fluidity of the form. I also very much like the incorporation of the title into the meaning of the poem. It adds some refreshing depth to what would be a pretty, descriptive poem without it. I have a hard time coming up with anything to be upset about in this very sweet poem.