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The Scream
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05-24-2025, 08:43 AM
The Scream
Eli, Eli, lama sabachthani? Eli, Eli, lama sabachthani? Eli, Eli, lama sabachthani? Eli, Eli, lama sabachthani? El? El? El? 
05-25-2025, 11:02 PM
I just wanna say this is effective even without googling
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05-26-2025, 08:41 AM
Ok, so the crowd heard it only once. The rest of the time he was either mumbling or thinking it.
I don’t think it subverts expectations, just reinforces what is already known. For that reason, I’ll go meh on this one.
05-28-2025, 06:03 AM
Really just an experiment in the effects of font.
A simple man screaming out to his God for (meaning) or (justice) or (help) maybe. Growing weary and slowly losing his (voice) or (breath) or (will to scream) - but not his faith - illustrated poorly by fading font. Considered writing 12 more lines in pure white but didn't think I'd get the readers. 
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