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06-01-2026, 11:24 AM

our moon
this night
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06-01-2026, 08:07 PM

Considering what happens in the original song, this is kinda sinister.

[Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Qgwfm9NUY8]

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06-01-2026, 10:02 PM

(06-01-2026, 08:07 PM)RiverNotch Wrote: Considering what happens in the original song, this is kinda sinister.

I dunno... I've always found it hard to believe that a little tangerine in herring-box shoes could sink, much less drown.

Ahem. Nice image, @Tiger.

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