"Cynicism - 4. (Love.)"

[Ris Yerg]

A candle stick
Has a calmer, longer life
Than any candle had.

[Leanne]

Now this is pure genius, it has everything a short form poem ought to have: a strong central image, no excess words, it's not overly telling and it gives the reader a springboard for further thought. Wonderful stuff.

[Ris Yerg]

Thank you so much, dear lady!
R.Y.

[billy]

a little gem R.Y.
works well on more than one level.
and has great insight,
thanks for the read

[Ris Yerg]

Thank you, my friend!
R.Y.

[violet]

This is bloody fantastic.

Short but with a certain 'impact'