09-16-2011, 05:49 AM
forty dollar sack
roll a good one and I'm out
a pretty fair trade
roll a good one and I'm out
a pretty fair trade
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09-16-2011, 07:10 AM
I am not qualified to reply as to whether or not this 'fits' the fromula, but I'm gonna go out on a limb and say it is a senryu.
Pass and share friend, pass and share...
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
09-16-2011, 07:29 AM
I care not indeed
Whether it fits the moldy Mold it's s'posed to fit
09-16-2011, 08:35 AM
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
09-16-2011, 10:13 AM
two senryu.
the latter is extremely good 
09-16-2011, 10:16 AM
Why thanks! I haven't made it to haiku's yet, but being ignorant never stopped me before.
09-16-2011, 12:14 PM
It's attitude what matters around here.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
09-18-2011, 04:27 AM
I have two blank spots in my brain in respect to poetry appreciation - Haiku and Emily Dickinson.....I can't seem to get either of them.
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