10-09-2011, 10:47 AM
pheasants break cover
my horse farts before shitting-
nature is noisy
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Haiku: Loudness:
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10-09-2011, 10:59 AM
The second line and cutting point falling where they do are a perfect example of comic misdirection. Loved it
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
10-10-2011, 05:52 AM
thanks for the love.
i think haiku and senryu are perfect mediums for comedy because they have a built i punch line with the cut. |
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