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Senryu: The wife:

Senryu: The wife:
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#1
10-09-2011, 11:23 AM

she is cape jasmine
over used toilet paper-
pleasantly shitty
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10-09-2011, 12:49 PM
(10-09-2011, 11:23 AM)billy Wrote:  she is cape jasmine
over used toilet paper-
pleasantly shitty

OMFG!!!! HystericalHystericalHystericalHysterical

I can't come to this board with a drink in my hand...

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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10-09-2011, 11:25 PM
Hysterical Hysterical Hysterical Hysterical

Nice! Still laughing . . .
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10-10-2011, 05:50 AM
glad you got something from it guys Smile
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