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First light greets worn floorboards
fondles evaporating dreams;
I fart my shalom.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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i love it. (being the fart king an all)
that first line is perfect. and the cut is just so
wouldn't change a thing.
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Yay! Thank you, Billy!
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
