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rayheinrich Offline
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#1
02-26-2012, 07:02 AM


    old habits
    gone -
    but soon to be repeated
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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billy Offline
Are you alluding to me?
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#2
04-06-2012, 06:07 PM (This post was last modified: 04-06-2012, 06:08 PM by billy.)
you could lose 'but'.

i think it's a great senryu (not sure if the title could be the seasonal word.)
can't believe i missed these. i'm impressed.
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