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rayheinrich Offline
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#1
02-26-2012, 07:17 AM


     these tender little shoots
     oh! weeds!
    (spring's children too)
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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billy Offline
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#2
04-06-2012, 06:02 PM
i like it a lot.
at 1st it reads like a senryu but if you break it down it reads as a great little haiku.
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