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The smell of Haiku:

The smell of Haiku:
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#1
04-29-2012, 12:02 PM

Snow bends the bough
wind bends the travellers back--
I fart to stay warm
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05-05-2012, 09:59 AM
I'm not sure if fart counts as "natural" as it is processed.
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05-05-2012, 10:15 AM
Does wind really bend the traveler's back? I would think the went would apply pressure across not down.
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#4
05-05-2012, 10:35 AM
Billy is bent anyway!
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