Flinch (senryu)

[billy]

i like it. the left over tart works a treat, i'm pushing bouquet to be the seasonal word.

[billy]

some say that, they also say a cutting word isn't required but when you read one it usually contains one. if it has a seasonal word it isn't a foul senryu are usually based on human foibles (like this one) thing is it also makes a good haiku.

[addy]

I laughed entirely too loud at this