05-19-2012, 01:26 PM
Ouch, indeed.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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laughing gas
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05-19-2012, 02:37 PM
i like how you cheated with 10 syls in the first
 i am enjoying the humour of the senryu you post. they have a nice tricky quality to them 
07-14-2012, 05:04 PM
WOW cheap dentist!
-------------------------- does -- count as one syllable?  Shouldn't that be $500?:angel: Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
07-14-2012, 06:46 PM
okay, 9 syls
it's twice as much as i had to pay 
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